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The book cover is a little misleading because I expected fantasy but it seems the story is more like realistic fiction than fantasy. But that doesn’t mean I don’t like the story. It’s really really good. I’m a stickler for handsome/charismatic male roles so Elias and Jaxon are really grabbing my attention but the way Savannah’s story is unfolding from chapter one is a good way to grab my attention and keep it. Really good job.
I’m not sure if you’re an actual author that just decided to come here and publish a book but i stg this is something I’d find in my local library. I go on sites like webnovel and royal road so I can escape the polished constraints that come with official books but holy cow this is pretty good. Engages you chapter one and keeps you the rest of the way. This book is an exception for someone who usually tries to get away from ultra realistic genres like this. Bravo.
Exciting read! The writer grabs you with every word. I’m looking forward to reading more from this writer🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
hmm a powerful female lead that isn’t unrealistic or annoying. Sold! My girlfriend recommended a few other stories to me on here that I could care less about so I went and looked up what I actually wanted to read and happened to come across this. I dunno how writing a review works on here but idc I like this dämn book and I’m giving full stars. Wish my gf was more like Savannah... hopefully she doesn’t see this review
i hope readers arent confused about how modern the name Savannah is. I was a little confusrd myself but regardless of that it doesn’t take away from the rest of the story. Since i like to play games like skyrim and other ancient-times types of genres, reading this felt like home to me and the description that you use to describe war and all the things that the characters are feeling sucks me into the book even more. sUper cool
So I’ve been browsing multiple literature sites to recruit authors for a project my team and I are working on and with little to no luck, I was going to give up until I came across this. Simply, amazing. I came across you on another platform but wasn’t sure if you would get my invitation since you seem to be taking writing very seriously on this site instead. Of course, some editing, revisions and a few other things can be fixed so the story is really refined but the story itself is golden. The dialogue between characters, seamless transitions from one setting to the next and descriptive imagery that is used to convey a point are all the things I’m looking for. If you’re interested I will message you my contact information. We are a small group stationed in the UK. We’ve reached out to friends in France and Italy and we’re hoping to gather authors from all around the world in order to bring this project to life. Please please please let me know if you are interested!
What makes this story stand out from the rest is how well written it is. I normally read books from European authors and very few American authors, and I got this app because I wanted to be able to carry multiple books with me wherever I went, I just didn’t expect the majority of the books on here to be... juvenile I guess? I just have to dig deep to find good stories and fortunately for me this is one of them. You write in a formal manner that catches my eye and it’s something that I’d like to see more of.
Very nice story! Reading the other reviews here convinced me to read a genre i was not familiar with and i absolutely love this! Keep on writing love you have all of us hooked haha
I’ve been reading novels on webnovel without an account and have never felt the need to create an account until now. I came across this book by chance and i am completely in love. I recommend that you finish this book and try to get it published. After editing the book and probaBly making the Chapters a tad bit longer (sorry that’s how good it is) I think it will sell!
This story seems like it was written by an official author or in other words: it is really well written. It is probably way to early to write a review on a book that only has 4 chapters but this book is an exception. The story almost plays out like a show as you read it, except i wish the chapters were longer lol. The book cover and title caught my eye but i stayed for the imagery. The way war and battles are written is not overexggerated, its simple, blunt, and surreal. For a book only 4 chapters in, well done.
I was going to vote with stone but it says it needs 15,000 words. please write more so i can vote because this story is so amazing. Since my english is not the best i am not confident to write reviews but i really like your story and each chapter leaves me wanting more to see what happens nexT! I wonder what will happen with Savannah. awesome awesome awesome book
Only a few chapters so far and the story feels promising. It isn’t like any other novel on this app and it is a lot more well written than most books, im surprised! Beautiful book cover and intriguing characters, i’m on a mission to find more mature stories like these on here lol
The book cover is a little misleading because I expected fantasy but it seems the story is more like realistic fiction than fantasy. But that doesn’t mean I don’t like the story. It’s really really good. I’m a stickler for handsome/charismatic male roles so Elias and Jaxon are really grabbing my attention but the way Savannah’s story is unfolding from chapter one is a good way to grab my attention and keep it. Really good job.
I’m not sure if you’re an actual author that just decided to come here and publish a book but i stg this is something I’d find in my local library. I go on sites like webnovel and royal road so I can escape the polished constraints that come with official books but holy cow this is pretty good. Engages you chapter one and keeps you the rest of the way. This book is an exception for someone who usually tries to get away from ultra realistic genres like this. Bravo.
Exciting read! The writer grabs you with every word. I’m looking forward to reading more from this writer🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
hmm a powerful female lead that isn’t unrealistic or annoying. Sold! My girlfriend recommended a few other stories to me on here that I could care less about so I went and looked up what I actually wanted to read and happened to come across this. I dunno how writing a review works on here but idc I like this dämn book and I’m giving full stars. Wish my gf was more like Savannah... hopefully she doesn’t see this review
i hope readers arent confused about how modern the name Savannah is. I was a little confusrd myself but regardless of that it doesn’t take away from the rest of the story. Since i like to play games like skyrim and other ancient-times types of genres, reading this felt like home to me and the description that you use to describe war and all the things that the characters are feeling sucks me into the book even more. sUper cool
So I’ve been browsing multiple literature sites to recruit authors for a project my team and I are working on and with little to no luck, I was going to give up until I came across this. Simply, amazing. I came across you on another platform but wasn’t sure if you would get my invitation since you seem to be taking writing very seriously on this site instead. Of course, some editing, revisions and a few other things can be fixed so the story is really refined but the story itself is golden. The dialogue between characters, seamless transitions from one setting to the next and descriptive imagery that is used to convey a point are all the things I’m looking for. If you’re interested I will message you my contact information. We are a small group stationed in the UK. We’ve reached out to friends in France and Italy and we’re hoping to gather authors from all around the world in order to bring this project to life. Please please please let me know if you are interested!
What makes this story stand out from the rest is how well written it is. I normally read books from European authors and very few American authors, and I got this app because I wanted to be able to carry multiple books with me wherever I went, I just didn’t expect the majority of the books on here to be... juvenile I guess? I just have to dig deep to find good stories and fortunately for me this is one of them. You write in a formal manner that catches my eye and it’s something that I’d like to see more of.
Very nice story! Reading the other reviews here convinced me to read a genre i was not familiar with and i absolutely love this! Keep on writing love you have all of us hooked haha
I’ve been reading novels on webnovel without an account and have never felt the need to create an account until now. I came across this book by chance and i am completely in love. I recommend that you finish this book and try to get it published. After editing the book and probaBly making the Chapters a tad bit longer (sorry that’s how good it is) I think it will sell!
This story seems like it was written by an official author or in other words: it is really well written. It is probably way to early to write a review on a book that only has 4 chapters but this book is an exception. The story almost plays out like a show as you read it, except i wish the chapters were longer lol. The book cover and title caught my eye but i stayed for the imagery. The way war and battles are written is not overexggerated, its simple, blunt, and surreal. For a book only 4 chapters in, well done.
I was going to vote with stone but it says it needs 15,000 words. please write more so i can vote because this story is so amazing. Since my english is not the best i am not confident to write reviews but i really like your story and each chapter leaves me wanting more to see what happens nexT! I wonder what will happen with Savannah. awesome awesome awesome book
Only a few chapters so far and the story feels promising. It isn’t like any other novel on this app and it is a lot more well written than most books, im surprised! Beautiful book cover and intriguing characters, i’m on a mission to find more mature stories like these on here lol
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